The Falling Sun

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#1

Grummore

Jul 21, 2003 13:55:39
Just finished to wrote an old plotline I had written about Raam and Dregoth, before knowing that there would be a campaing coming along. I think it could be used kind of after the "official" campaing of dregoth. Take a look?


P.S.: It is 2h57pm it will be uploaded in 5 min.
#2

Grummore

Jul 22, 2003 12:50:35
Hey! You fluff peoples, have a look please and tell me what you think!
#3

nytcrawlr

Jul 22, 2003 13:26:18
Other than some of the begining formatting I like it.

Good job.
#4

Grummore

Jul 22, 2003 14:05:21
What do you mean by beginning formatting?
#5

nytcrawlr

Jul 22, 2003 14:57:59
With the dwarf talking, hard to follow.
#6

Grummore

Jul 22, 2003 15:51:40
Maybe you could help me edit it. Btw, unless it's bad english, I intended to be that hard to understand with the dwarf, it is an old dwarfy.
#7

zombiegleemax

Jul 23, 2003 16:02:56
hi grummore!
Ill email you as soon as I copy the maps.

I read the second part of the story, in my campaign hamanu used this method to conquer raam, he cut it in two, and let two leading factions of raam quarrel among themselves about it.

so your idea is very apealing to me. it also raise the drama, as there is constant fighting between the two parts.

a question about house stel thoug: isnt it more appropriate to use house Mke? because it is the leading house of raam, and probably has more troops and military powers at its disposal.

I also like many factions, I would involve the PCs with adventuring and deciding who to trust, although in the end, I would think that dregoth is victorious OR dregoth is removing his troops from the city, in order to do something horrible toit, maybe encase it in glass, until he can return later and finish the job.

Or something else...
#8

Grummore

Jul 24, 2003 7:06:57
Hum... I will have a look at Stel or Mke, it's probably a mistake. Thanks !