New location - "Mak Thren"

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#1

flindbar

Jan 10, 2006 9:35:23
Been working on a side project on and off.
Its called Mak Thren - The Floating City.

I'd really love any constructive feedback from the community.

Its definately a work in progress, so there are lots of holes.
Apologies for the cheesy webwork too. :D

Its all to be found here --> www.gyregam.com/darksun/mak/

Cheers
flindbar
#2

Sysane

Jan 10, 2006 9:51:16
This link brings you no where.
#3

zombiegleemax

Jan 10, 2006 10:27:17
Copy and paste the link, don't click on it.

gave it a quick once-over. It's an interesting idea, though it seems better to me to have it actually be floating on water. Which means have it somewhere in a small area of water in the middle of a mud flat somewhere in the sea of silt. that's just me though.
#4

flindbar

Jan 10, 2006 11:20:55
www.gyregam.com/darksun/mak/

I've fixed the link above.
(sorry Sysane) :D
#5

Oninotaki

Jan 10, 2006 20:21:33
thats pretty neat, I like it alot, not nearly as grand as I feared it would be, but it hints at other more ancient things. Keep up the good work on it:D
#6

flindbar

Jan 11, 2006 1:21:25
thats pretty neat, I like it alot, not nearly as grand as I feared it would be, but it hints at other more ancient things. Keep up the good work on it:D

Thanks Oninotaki.
:D :D :D
#7

zombiegleemax

Jan 11, 2006 1:42:54
i look forward to reading more as you develop it. i'm always excited to see people developing areas far and away from the known areas!
#8

Zardnaar

Jan 11, 2006 3:00:23
Good ideas. Might have to steal it (yoink).
#9

huntercc

Jan 11, 2006 7:27:43
The name is spelled differently in your logo vs the rest of your site... but besides that, yeah looks great :D
#10

flindbar

Jan 11, 2006 7:46:50
The name is spelled differently in your logo vs the rest of your site... but besides that, yeah looks great :D

Oh man ! How much of a dick do I feel !

A few minutes in fireworks later ......... and hey presto ! :D