Air Snakes spell

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#1

burningspear

Jun 24, 2004 20:27:05
hi guys, its been a while
this is a spell i want to create:

Air Snakes

this spell creates a number of semi translucent blue green snakelike beings cackling with electrical power wich have theyre tails vanish in to "thin air" (a bit like an oriental dragon) and swirl around the caster in the area and at the casters power of personality is directed to stomp a creature into sumissiveness or die.
lvl: 5 (is actually for a witch but i did not know where to post)
components: v,s,df
maybe a more expensive component per casting?
casting time: 1 action
duration:3 rnds +1 rnd per 2 lvl's
range: 5 ft +5 ft per 2 lvls, max of 50 ft.
target: minimum of 1 creature, max of 1 creature per "Snake"
spellresistance: yes
spell penetration must be checked for each "Snake" in turn, and only if all "Snakes" fail to penetrate is the target save from this spell for its duration.

effect:
1 "Snake" per 4 levels, at 2d8 blungeon dam. and +1 electricity dam. per level
up to a max. of +15,
attacks are made at a touch to hit of bab of the caster plus the casters charisma mod

let me hear what u think of it plz

thnx
#2

Pennarin

Jun 24, 2004 20:38:12
When I worked on the Ashen monster write-up, I had to cook-up a Sorcerous Attack with electrical serpents. Feedback on the monster indicated that I needed to nail that one very precisely. So I looked at spells that create an effect which itself has stats, like the spell gutsnake, from Magic of Faerûn.
Check it out, or any other spell with has stats for the effect. That way you don't have to badger your brain with questions such as the bab of the "snake" and other niceties...
#3

zombiegleemax

Jun 25, 2004 2:05:15
Air Snakes

lvl: 5 (is actually for a witch but i did not know where to post)

level 5 for who? Clerics? Druids? Wiz/Sor? Does it fit in a Domain?

components: v,s,df
maybe a more expensive component per casting?
casting time: 1 action
duration:3 rnds +1 rnd per 2 lvl's
range: 5 ft +5 ft per 2 lvls, max of 50 ft.

never before seen a cap on range, I don't see a point in it remaining.

target: minimum of 1 creature, max of 1 creature per "Snake"
spellresistance: yes
spell penetration must be checked for each "Snake" in turn, and only if all "Snakes" fail to penetrate is the target save from this spell for its duration.

effect:
1 "Snake" per 4 levels, at 2d8 blungeon dam. and +1 electricity dam. per level
up to a max. of +15,
attacks are made at a touch to hit of bab of the caster plus the casters charisma mod

2d8 bludgeoning for a small or medium creature is quite high. Medium sized snakes out of the MM do 1d4+str. Besides which, the main point of the spell is the electrical component... Right? doing so much physical damage seems odd.

Also how many hp do the snakes have? What are they vulnerable too? etc etc. If the spell is to last rounds than these sorts of questions need answers.

hope some of this helps

regards
the cute and fluffy DM
#4

burningspear

Jun 25, 2004 9:03:06
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Air Snakes

lvl: 5 (is actually for a witch but i did not know where to post)
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level 5 for who? Clerics? Druids? Wiz/Sor? Does it fit in a Domain?

i said with clearness it is for a WITCH........
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components: v,s,df
maybe a more expensive component per casting?
casting time: 1 action
duration:3 rnds +1 rnd per 2 lvl's
range: 5 ft +5 ft per 2 lvls, max of 50 ft.

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never before seen a cap on range, I don't see a point in it remaining.

ok

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target: minimum of 1 creature, max of 1 creature per "Snake"
spellresistance: yes
spell penetration must be checked for each "Snake" in turn, and only if all "Snakes" fail to penetrate is the target save from this spell for its duration.

effect:
1 "Snake" per 4 levels, at 2d8 blungeon dam. and +1 electricity dam. per level
up to a max. of +15,
attacks are made at a touch to hit of bab of the caster plus the casters charisma mod

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2d8 bludgeoning for a small or medium creature is quite high. Medium sized snakes out of the MM do 1d4+str. Besides which, the main point of the spell is the electrical component... Right? doing so much physical damage seems odd.

Also how many hp do the snakes have? What are they vulnerable too? etc etc. If the spell is to last rounds than these sorts of questions need answers.

the snakes r made of "solidified" air so no hp..
snakes have no hp and can only be stopped by spellresistance and dispelling them, and of course by prot from electricity dam re garding that type of dam.


thnx for so far anyway
:whatsthis