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PSCS: Chapter 6 Released

Post/Author/DateTime Post
#1
moogle001
Jan 19, 2005 1:12:15 Head over to Planewalker.com and download Chapter 6: Life in the Multiverse for a real guide to planar society in the Planescape setting! Hurry up. Go! Now!!
#2
sildatorak
Jan 19, 2005 2:32:46 Isn't it funny how often it seems that the invariably made typo is on the first page? You left a time unit out of the mimir's speech or are using "exploring" in as a noun. I'm not trying to judge, just pointing it out so you can correct it.
#3
Shemeska_the_Marauder
Jan 19, 2005 2:48:46 Tell me about it. I read over the chapter itself today, and noticed a typo in one of the sections that I'd had a hand in. I blame it on chaos imps. It's always the chaos imps. Except when it's the yugoloths.
#4
zombiegleemax
Jan 19, 2005 6:28:18 The whole chapter is GREAT and I say that despite the fact I don't like changes which Faction War has brought. Great work!

There are still some minor bugs. In the part about portals it is said that Plague-Mort had slipped into the Abyss and a new gate-town, Blight, had appeared. But later, when describing trade and merchants of the planes, the name of Plague-Mort is mentioned several times.
#5
zombiegleemax
Jan 19, 2005 9:10:50 : Peery glance :

That was the most energetic Bleaker exclamation ever!

: Removal of mask :

Its Old Man Withers, the Anarchist what's trying to rob the gold mill!

Case closeded!
#6
zombiegleemax
Jan 19, 2005 11:21:10 There are some days when I fil soooooooo strong...

:smiles maniacally:
#7
weenie
Jan 19, 2005 19:23:56 Excellent work. My favorite chapter so far. Some minor complaints regarding the crunchy bits, but that's for the PW forum.
#8
moogle001
Jan 20, 2005 0:48:05 Please, point out any typos you find so I can correct them for future releases.
#9
sarig_the_genie
Jan 20, 2005 8:39:15 For future releases, if you added bookmarks in the pdf, this would be greatly appriceated! Then I wouldn't have to do so myself (;

Also, Her Serenity was a bit annoying when reading over Her, but She's not really getting in the way, and I suppose removing Her would have Dire consequenses (;

Edit: I forgot to mention it's excellent (:
#10
Cyriss
Jan 20, 2005 12:01:56
Please, point out any typos you find so I can correct them for future releases.

On page 38 of the pdf, in the "Tools and Skill Kits" chart at the top, "Mechanical Cloak" and also "Musical Instrument Arvandorian" have typos ("clocak" & "Msical").

That's all I noticed while reading over it so far.

Post/Author/DateTime	Post
#1 moogle001 Jan 19, 2005 1:12:15	Head over to Planewalker.com and download Chapter 6: Life in the Multiverse for a real guide to planar society in the Planescape setting! Hurry up. Go! Now!!
#2 sildatorak Jan 19, 2005 2:32:46	Isn't it funny how often it seems that the invariably made typo is on the first page? You left a time unit out of the mimir's speech or are using "exploring" in as a noun. I'm not trying to judge, just pointing it out so you can correct it.
#3 Shemeska_the_Marauder Jan 19, 2005 2:48:46	Tell me about it. I read over the chapter itself today, and noticed a typo in one of the sections that I'd had a hand in. I blame it on chaos imps. It's always the chaos imps. Except when it's the yugoloths.
#4 zombiegleemax Jan 19, 2005 6:28:18	The whole chapter is GREAT and I say that despite the fact I don't like changes which Faction War has brought. Great work! There are still some minor bugs. In the part about portals it is said that Plague-Mort had slipped into the Abyss and a new gate-town, Blight, had appeared. But later, when describing trade and merchants of the planes, the name of Plague-Mort is mentioned several times.
#5 zombiegleemax Jan 19, 2005 9:10:50	: Peery glance : That was the most energetic Bleaker exclamation ever! : Removal of mask : Its Old Man Withers, the Anarchist what's trying to rob the gold mill! Case closeded!
#6 zombiegleemax Jan 19, 2005 11:21:10	There are some days when I fil soooooooo strong... :smiles maniacally:
#7 weenie Jan 19, 2005 19:23:56	Excellent work. My favorite chapter so far. Some minor complaints regarding the crunchy bits, but that's for the PW forum.
#8 moogle001 Jan 20, 2005 0:48:05	Please, point out any typos you find so I can correct them for future releases.
#9 sarig_the_genie Jan 20, 2005 8:39:15	For future releases, if you added bookmarks in the pdf, this would be greatly appriceated! Then I wouldn't have to do so myself (; Also, Her Serenity was a bit annoying when reading over Her, but She's not really getting in the way, and I suppose removing Her would have Dire consequenses (; Edit: I forgot to mention it's excellent (:
#10 Cyriss Jan 20, 2005 12:01:56	Please, point out any typos you find so I can correct them for future releases. On page 38 of the pdf, in the "Tools and Skill Kits" chart at the top, "Mechanical Cloak" and also "Musical Instrument Arvandorian" have typos ("clocak" & "Msical"). That's all I noticed while reading over it so far.